What do you think of my extended metaphor poem?

twicrack

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What is confusion?

Is it a bird without water, a bird without wings, like a singsong dove who can no longer sing?
Does it feel similar to a bird falling to the ground and never being found?
Or is it like a bird, but a bird with water, a bird with wings, that suddenly blinks and loses his drink?
Does it portray a bird without memory, who crys and weeps and mostly sleeps?
Or Is it just like me, with no future-who cant even change-
No even for the better?

THANKS! ♥YA!
 
this is really good
it reminds me of the poem called poem by allama mohammed iqbal
 
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