The Fallen Angel
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Okay, I tried asking about this book before and I just got a load of crap posing as answers. So I'll try again.
I got the idea for this book about a seemingly unremarkable girl named Ashlyn, who's just starting college. Except Ashlyn isn't normal. She can see ghosts, and as far as she knows, she's the only person in the world that can.
Ashlyn is hoping that college will be a fresh start for her- but she just had to go and sign up for the most haunted school in the United Kingdom.
Ashlyn saw ghosts before, and she sees them now. But things are changing. Ashlyn is seeing strangers and friends alike when she's asleep, screaming and dying in her dreams. Angry spirits are yelling in her ears and trying to hurt her. And the calmer ghosts are simply telling her she's special- in a very, very bad way...
So, what do you think of my book?
Oh, I forgot to say: What do you guys think of my blurb and tagline?
Blurb:
Do you see them?
Do you really know what it is? That prickle on the back of your neck, the falling sensation you get when you’re about to fall asleep, the sudden coldness that attacks you unexpectedly? Do you really know?
I do.
I can see them.
Ever since she was a baby, Ashlyn has seen them. Spirits. Ghosts. Dead people. She doesn’t know why, and no-one else even knows she sees them.
Ashlyn is hoping that college will be a fresh start for her. But she just had to pick the most haunted school in England.
It doesn’t matter; she saw ghosts before, she sees them now. Big deal.
But before she didn’t see people screaming and dying in her dreams. Before, angry spirits didn’t yell and throw her from her bed. Before, the ghosts didn’t talk to her, tell her she was special- in a bad way…
Tagline:
I see them. Do you?
I got the idea for this book about a seemingly unremarkable girl named Ashlyn, who's just starting college. Except Ashlyn isn't normal. She can see ghosts, and as far as she knows, she's the only person in the world that can.
Ashlyn is hoping that college will be a fresh start for her- but she just had to go and sign up for the most haunted school in the United Kingdom.
Ashlyn saw ghosts before, and she sees them now. But things are changing. Ashlyn is seeing strangers and friends alike when she's asleep, screaming and dying in her dreams. Angry spirits are yelling in her ears and trying to hurt her. And the calmer ghosts are simply telling her she's special- in a very, very bad way...
So, what do you think of my book?
Oh, I forgot to say: What do you guys think of my blurb and tagline?
Blurb:
Do you see them?
Do you really know what it is? That prickle on the back of your neck, the falling sensation you get when you’re about to fall asleep, the sudden coldness that attacks you unexpectedly? Do you really know?
I do.
I can see them.
Ever since she was a baby, Ashlyn has seen them. Spirits. Ghosts. Dead people. She doesn’t know why, and no-one else even knows she sees them.
Ashlyn is hoping that college will be a fresh start for her. But she just had to pick the most haunted school in England.
It doesn’t matter; she saw ghosts before, she sees them now. Big deal.
But before she didn’t see people screaming and dying in her dreams. Before, angry spirits didn’t yell and throw her from her bed. Before, the ghosts didn’t talk to her, tell her she was special- in a bad way…
Tagline:
I see them. Do you?