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Jane

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(OK ITS A SUMMERY, PLZ TELL ME IF THERE IS A MISTAKE OR IF IT CONFUSES YOU. I WANT TO SEND IN A QUERY LETTER TO AN AGENT. YES I ASKED THIS ALREADY BUT I CHANGED ALOT. SO PLZ HELP ME)

Caught in a depression she cannot escape, after her grandfather's death, Jean heads to the Philippines for her winter vacation. Desperate to for a change, she visits her immoral best friend Catherine. In an attempt to fill the emptiness of her soul, Jean immerses herself into Catherine's wild world. Failing to stay true to her values, she attends parties which are dominated by drugs and reckless behavior. As time went on, while watching her Jean starts to admiring Catherine's tough girl attitude and lack of emotion which Jean lacked herself.

Her loyalty is tested as relationships become more passionate than she could ever have imagined. Playing with fire, she makes an agonizing decision between the man she wants and the man she needs. Just as Jean opens her heart to B their friendship evolves into a romantic one after he expresses his true feeling for her with a kiss. She realizes the love between them is more one sided and chooses Johnny, the apple of Catherine's eye. This is more than a love triangle, this is a love square and inside the boundaries of those four sides, friends and lovers clash. Eventually Catherine discovers the forbidden relationship with Johnny, causing a rift in their friendship driving Jean out of town by guilt.

She continues to do what she originally intended to, go to Manila to visit her grandfather's grave where she soon finds out a secret that will change everything she ever believed. Her grandfather is alive and hiding. Why was he hiding? And is she in danger since discovering the cover up?
 
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