What do you think of my birthday poem!? How could I improve it?

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☮Lindsayツ

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It's for my best friend, and it's supposed to be funny, not sappy or anything.
I know it's kinda lame...so how how could I improve it, as in make it funnier!?

Cory,
I will tell you a story
Been best friends for years
now finally 16, so cheers!
This'll be really short
but you're a good sport
so even though it was yesterday,
have a FANTASTIC birthday!!

I want it short and sweet and silly and funny.
 
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