what do you think of my attempt at writing poetry :)?

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The crevasses of my heart,
Speak loud and clear.
They mourn for you,
They shed some light,
For the pain and suffering.
Another passing day,
As the hours roll over,
Another piece slowly falls away.

A deep sleep,
Yet an early morning.
Taking a walk,
In the depths of my dreams.
I slide away to a place,
A place so peaceful,
Producing such harmony,
A place that is away from you.
Away from your beautiful face,
The face that still haunts my every movement
Reminding me..

Life flashs before my eyes,
The knife on the kitchen floor,
Trembling,
Is this the way I want to end it,
End it all,
Give up?
Fall apart?
Get back up?
Thoughts feel my head,
Maybe,
Just maybe I could live,
Without you by my side.




it needs a title as well.....

what do you think of it???


i have two others as well :)
 
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