What do you think about this poem?

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What do you think about this poem I wrote, feel free to change anything to make it sound better. Thanks!

The night you called me beautiful,Â*
Was when these feelings started
The late night text, the long talksÂ*
Doesn't help these feelings at all

These feelings are unexplainable,
These feelings were unexpected
Ever since the kiss under the stars,
These feelings are unstoppable

Why do I have these feelings
Is it cause your sweet
Or is it cause of your smile
I don't understand these feelings at all

It doesn't help you have a girlfriend
Especially one you care about so much
So again, i will ask.
Why do I have these feelings for youÂ*
 
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