What do you think about this poem I wrote? Scars and Healing?

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SCARS AND HEALING

Open pain,
a bloody wound
Open
on my hand

A bright red color
against my skin
Slowly flowing
a desperate plea

An accident
causing pain
An accident
but saving still

It drowns the pain
hides the hurt
Changes the emotional
into the physical

A silent cry
an open wound
An open pain
but healing starts

A sweet forgiveness
a scar revealing
Bringing memories
but muchly joy


I wrote this after I slipped with my knife(I was cutting bark off of a dead tree for a class I was teaching)and I gouged a chunk into my hand. I didn't cut on purpose, but it brought the same kind of feelings it would have if I did. What do you think?
 
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