What do you think about this my poem?

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Parisa

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yes i made a poem for my lover what do you think about this can i write more poem.

Flower is beautiful for a day
but you are beautiful for always
 
It's short and simple and sweet, but if you're seriously interested in poetry I'd try to add more detail and filler. I mean, a two-line poem isn't that amazing; try wowing him with more lines/verses in between what you already have.
 
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