What do you think about this as a story line? (also, help with writing and

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advice/tips please? )? I have NO experience in writing, I never read or write. But I keep getting ideas so hey, why not make a short story out of it? It's really short.

2 best friends (family friends and known each other since they were little) go to Mexico for a cousin's wedding. The girl that is getting married had a thing for best friend #1, so the husband gets jealous (also because he's really drunk from partying) and sends out a gang to kill that best friend #1. Best friend #2 gets angry and upset and decides to avenge his best friend. He joins the military/army/etc. to fight for his country, but it all started because he wanted to stand up for his lost best friend. Best friend #2 is trying to wipe gangs and fight against gang members and those who do crimes and such. :/

I really have no idea how to put it any better. :P
If I should add anything to make it even more sad and adventurous, please tell me!

Also, any help with becoming a better writer? I am not the best writer, so my story will usually be pretty straight forward :P

Thank you!.

PS: Please no negative comments.
 
I think it sounds pretty good!! Like, a good action/suspense story!

I try to write stories sometimes too, but they're waaaaay lame.
Yours is good!
 
I kinda like it.
i think maybe when u do write it make it dramadic like he has a hard time at war and gets beat up by gang but trys more and more untill he wins idk lol if u publish it ill so read it lol
 
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