What do you think about my story?

  • Thread starter Thread starter Bella L
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Bella L

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I posted this on one of my other accounts but Ive decided to stop using it.
So please tell me what you think!
Its only the first chapter so nothing interesting really goes on.
http://www.quizilla.com/stories/7282088/transportable-new-version
 
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