What Do You Think About My Poetry? (:?

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KukuKels

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His Hair Invites Me To Play In It
His Eyes Make Me Melt In Them
His Smile Is Contagious
His Laugh Is Too, It's Outrageous

When We Hug, I Feel Safe
When We Hold Hands, I'm In My Special Place
When We Walk Together, I'm Happy As Can Be
When We Kiss, I Wish He Knew What He Means To Me

No Matter How Mad I Am, He Always Calms Me Down
No Matter How Sad I Am, He Always Erases My Frown
No Matter How Confused, He Helps Me Understand
No Matter How I Act, He's My Number One Fan

None Of These Are The Reasons
None Of These Explain
Why I Love Him, It's Quite Plain
Oh But He Doesn't See
I Love Him Because He Loves Me
 
its good but your trying to much to rhyme let it come naturally without worrying about the rhyme and it will flow better. apart from that its good
 
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