What do you think about my poem?

Desiree

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Its like love at first sight.
you feel hot and overwhelmed.
but be so careful not to fall
cuz moods then change
and that hot becomes warm.
and that warm becomes cold
and that cold lasts as long as
that love, seems like forever...
don't worry, you'll spring back.
back to life..and feel warm again.
sometimes you go away
to a darker place
and everythings different.
no more love.
so you visit for a season.
and fall again comes
but remember ..you always come back
till then you'll carry a sweater
and your seasonal hat.
-des
I'm thinking about naming the TITLE : "Autumn".. but what do you think it should be?
 
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