what do you think about my poem?

bandgeek19

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Drugs
He's hurting himself
He's hurting other people
a smoke here
a needle there
its no big deal everybody does it
his friends encourage him
they think its a blast
his parents try to stop him
how much longer will he last


his sister looks up to him
she watches what he does
she see how popular he is
and decides to start doing drugs

the drugs are to powerful
and she's in the hospital again
her brother decides
things have gotten way out of hand

he sits in the waiting room
praying shes alright
they had to pump her stomach
and shes just barley hanging on to her life

the doctor comes out
a sad look on his face
he says they did all they could
but her little body just couldnt handle the drugs

The brother drops to his knees
and starts to cry
he knows its his fault that his eleven year old sister just died

three months later he still lives with the guilt
that his little sister died of the stupid things that he did
he can't take it anymore
so he writes a suicide letter
telling his parents that he'll love them forever

he walks to his sisters room
a gun in his hand
he turns on her favorite song and puts the gun to his head
he pulls the trigger and now he is dead

his parents come home
two hours later
they know somethings wrong as soon as they hear the song
they run to her room
and find their son lying there
a gun in one hand
in the other hand he holds a picture of their daughter

what do you think ?im 15 years old
 
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