What do you think about my poem?

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The Defeated
I have been defeated
But I was able to pick myself up
And by doing that I grew stronger
And I learned a lesson
Unlearnable by those who never lose
When you never lose, you never learn
From your mistakes comes knowledge
And that is how you grow stonger
Being able to pick yourself up
After you've been defeated
Is better than never losing at all
So if you've been defeated
Don't be afraid to pick yourself up
And grow stronger!

Kayla Klein
Copyright ©2008 Kayla Klein
 
OMG that is so cool, it is nice, i like it, but you should know that many ppl dosnt lke t hearing this kinda things because they have problesm and they just do not accept this kinda things but it is so cool for me


good job, i am gonna copy it so i can show it to my students!!!!
 
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