what do you think about my poem? Be honest give me your opinion?

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Edgar

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I was born in this cruel world.
To experience pain and hate.
Only to be born with a hole in my heart that i never noticed before.
I was born in this cruel world.
To be filed with rage, revenge, and with great sorrow.
I was born in this cruel world.
I stand here waiting to be saved from this cruel world.
 
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