What do you think about my new poem?

B

Beth Holland

New member
And it's down once again
Where I'm stuck in dark
With nothing but my haunting pass
And my new mistakes

Nothing but a blade in one hand
A bottle of beer in the other*
Drinking my heart out*
For I'm dying any ways

With me loosing my mind
Loosing my sight
I go insane*
I make one slice; Deep down to the vain

And I get taken in*
To the mental health center
Locked up in a hospital room
For I'm a danger to myself

Always gonna be remembered as the girl
With a knife in one hand*
That Peirced her heart*
With beer floading her brain*
 
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