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786 - 6 March 2012 - Zahid from Pakistan

DEATH

Like bride my death does fascinate me
I want to die, death, take me with thee
I been alone in the world of happiness
And never been kissed, you better kiss
On my sense and draw my spirit away
I am strongly hurt, make me thy prey

I been along in the lights of this world
Never could say any, my heart's word
Obtain me into squared walls of grave
My soul suffers in its grave like slave
I've no blood in my heart for to bleed
I have plea for its freedom to be freed

Death you are so simple that you play
In my heart with blood, without delay
Like a baby boy playing with his doll
Him like you, lift me up, after my fall
In association I been alone all the life
Where are you, be mine, be my wife!
 
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