What Do you honestly think of this?????------ POETRY?

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Your Love Spell



each moment that i had looked into your eyes i saw,
i saw the kindness i had delved for,
i saw love and kindness, beauty and faith,
but what was to be love was only a lie,
you had broken my trust,
you had broken my love for you,
every thing we had was gone in a minute,
i trusted you and got pain in return,
how could you love her when you loved me,
how could you tell me so many lies and made me presuppose,
i loved you dearly,
you calmed to love me,
you had hypnotist me,
you'd cast me in your love spell,
but now i know one plus one doesn't always equal two,
and some times love is just merely pain under a mask
 
use better descriptive words like gazed. If you have to look up some vocabulary. change hypnotist to hypnosis on. otherwise it's glorious.
 
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