What do you honestly think about these lines of poetry/lyrics I just came up with?

RoboCop

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she speaks in opaque tongues/
an illusion of translucence/
her eyes as warm as rain/
a delusion of resemblance


interpretations would be nice :)
I won't be hurt if you don't like it it didn't take that long to come up with so just be honest.. I'm starting to write bits of poetry to turn into lyrics to the songs I'm writing.
It's not exactly about being in love with a girl..
And the lines are connected probably more so than the average poem.. I think you just don't understand the poem..
 
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