What do you guys think of this poem? I'm open to any kinds of feedback. I wrote it?

Bryan Y

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Dreams aren't fake, dreams are real
what they reveal, may seem unreal
Dreams are the future, dreams are the past
Dreams are a reminder for those who have passed
Dreams bring comfort, dreams bring thought
on occasion they cause intense distraught
Dreams are your friend AND foe
Dreams take you to places you never want to go...
Dreams keep you asleep, keep you sane
Dreams abolish or unveil inner pain
Dreams are the gateways to your mind
Dreams are what keep you under the category of mankind
Dreams are shared amongst all living things
even kings, and things with wings
Dreams are known world wide
Dreams are something you cannot hide
Everybody dreams
I dream, you dream
We all dream
Without dreams we would be lost and stranded
Upon an island where nobody has landed
 
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