What do yall think of this verse now (editited)?

Lebanon Don

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Secretly im plottin carefully, once perfected ill take over easily,
Call it robbery but honestly i could classify as the hottest mc,
Made it my policy to demolish those who try to diss me,
Get me angry, ill come at you lyrically,
Multies, i have infinate amount these,
Spit em rapidly,
My artillery is atomically aimed at my enemies,
I officially transphormed this industry into monopolies,
Im a menace to humanity, No apologies,
Are you kiddin me, no one can mirror me,
Try to battle me is a mockery,
Ill rip you apart savagely,
It'll crash the whole economy,
This is my city, leavin back a prophecy,
While yall study about equality,
Im mentally steady, been lucky lately i could probably win the lottery,
Literaly im comin at you with sick delivery, strikly flexin my writting ability,
This initally was suppose to be a story of tragedy,
 
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