what do u think of this poetry?

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My Mind Frame

i got the build under and the frame is crazy above the shoulders
no debate the way i do it, makes u crave it..
i live my own life no trace to my pace
i got georgia peaches in my sunshine state
no more cookn, i enjoy lifes flavor
im bein catered, and the taste is what i savor
things end but what remains is life
what was left in my mouth makes this journey a delight,

pie in the mouth feels like water on the tongue
whos intentions isnt to get in some fun
pocahontas leave a message, i no longer speak your language
born in a village im on a love quest pilgrimage

ahha

dear mama, come holla, take my number if u desire
mines leaks thru fire
make u yearn if u dont learn when im gone the feeln burns
no hurt around the heart but below the belt aint my concern


my presence has an essence even once i left the room
a silent chamber, an erotic tomb
from your hands to your toes
my style makes u sweat
it imposes on ur clothes

the line that i walk has no chalk to it,
im running a campaign motherfucker i just do it
 
No disrespect intended, but you did ask for opinions. I have neither liking nor respect for rap. It seems to be something cobbled up with a rhyming dictionary in one hand and a drum machine in the other.
 
No disrespect intended, but you did ask for opinions. I have neither liking nor respect for rap. It seems to be something cobbled up with a rhyming dictionary in one hand and a drum machine in the other.
 
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