what do u think about his poem?

Jose L

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well i wrote this poem when i was sad yesterday
what do u think ?

LOVE IS
Love is like candy. It could either be sweet or bitter. People are always looking for the sweet love. Some of us don't find it or worse we find the bitter love that we think is sweet. So if you find the sweet love never let it go because you might never find another sweet love again. If you find the bitter one don't think twice before letting it go. Love can also open your eyes or blind you. If love opens your eyes you are going to see a much better world. If it blinds you it will make you fall hard because the only person you are going to care is your lover and not what is around you. Love can be a cure but it could also be a deathly pain. It could cure what ever your heart is going through. If your love transforms into a deathly pain it will destroy your heart making it harder for you to love again. Some people fight because they want to be love. Others died because of the pain that love has cause them.
i wrote it yesterday when i was sad

im 15

the title is
LOVE IS
Love is like candy. It could either be sweet or bitter. People are always looking for the sweet love. Some of us don't find it or worse we find the bitter love that we think is sweet. So if you find the sweet love never let it go because you might never find another sweet love again. If you find the bitter one don't think twice before letting it go. Love can also open your eyes or blind you. If love opens your eyes you are going to see a much better world. If it blinds you it will make you fall hard because the only person you are going to care is your lover and not what is around you. Love can be a cure but it could also be a deathly pain. It could cure what ever your heart is going through. If your love transforms into a deathly pain it will destroy your heart making it harder for you to love again. Some people fight because they want to be love. Others died because of the pain that love has cause them.
 
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