I've been wondering. Is my poem any good? I'm currently writing a small poem for my English class, and I don't want to hand in anything below average, so, what do you think about it? It's just an early draft, though. I'll probably change it around.
As I said.
Big mishap; just ahead.
See? I told you,
On the way; left alone. She's gone.
Now I'm alone.
The meadow grass,
... my bare bones.
I'm vacant; now growing cold...
Thank you for reading. I'd like a very honest opinion; don't pull punches. I'm excited to see what you think about it.
As I said.
Big mishap; just ahead.
See? I told you,
On the way; left alone. She's gone.
Now I'm alone.
The meadow grass,
... my bare bones.
I'm vacant; now growing cold...
Thank you for reading. I'd like a very honest opinion; don't pull punches. I'm excited to see what you think about it.