What are your thoughts on this poem?

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I wrote this myself.

Title is "Will you be mine?"


I wrote this to ask a simple question
Its one you've heard before

"Will you be mine?"

This isn't my first confession
But this one means a whole lot more
So all I want to ask
is if your willing to take a chance

Last time you weren't sure
you said you had to think it through
but the truth was, I couldn't endure

So I stand here in front of you
waiting for a sign
that says
you will be mine
 
aww super cute and adorable i love it and im preety sure who ever you wrote it for will two
 
It's great but I think for the last line u could change it to: "will you be mine" Otherwise its great
 
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