Miranda Bowling
New member
it's personal, but i just want some opinions, it's for my boyfriend, does it sound good so far, should i make it longer??
baby the day you walked into my heart you came into my heart you showed me what true love is. it is exactly the way they describe it, it’s magical, breathtaking, more than can really be described into words. Just thinking about how much I love you sometimes makes me smile, it can make me cry as well, tears pour down my face when I think about how much you mean to me and how life without you would be, I think about everything, the good times, the bad times, everything, sometimes it’s just overwhelming, knowing how much I love you, how I never want to be without you, how much we have come through together and proved that we have true love. I want to be with you forever, love can be so many things, friendship love, family love, relationship love, but I believe our kind of love is special. it’s more than just a relationship, it’s this deep connection I only feel with you. No other person can make me feel that kind of connection, where im a part of you. We’re a part of each other. That’s why it hurts so much to be away from you. You’re away from the one you belong with. It’s like a heart without a beat, like a fish without water, life without breath, like earth without gravity. It would be a big depressing mess, like a desolate field, a plant without water. You’re more than my boyfriend, you’re also my best friend, you’re the person I feel closest to, I know there are times when I can be selfish, mean, and impatient, or do things to hurt you, but I am sorry for all of those times, because when I really think about it, there isn’t much to complain about when it comes to love, and there is no reason to ever take something like it for granted. When I look into my heart, I see beautiful crystals and the part where I see you shines brighter than everything else, I do have your heart, but in my heart I also believe that ours have come together, like they were glued, they can’t be pulled apart. I think about all of the memories that we have together, all of the memories that touch my heart and make me smile. I love the way that my hand fits perfectly in yours, the way that you look when you smile at me, when I look in your eyes and I just feel like I am at home, and home is where the heart is. Your arms hold me and I feel protected, when your holding me I just want to stay there and never let go, feeling the connection between us when we are touching, like the connection whether we are hugging, kissing, holding hands, I love being near you, even when we’re apart, as hard and saddening it is to not be near you, you are still in my heart. The feeling of when our lips first met was magical, and everytime our lips meet still yet, I feel the love we have.
baby the day you walked into my heart you came into my heart you showed me what true love is. it is exactly the way they describe it, it’s magical, breathtaking, more than can really be described into words. Just thinking about how much I love you sometimes makes me smile, it can make me cry as well, tears pour down my face when I think about how much you mean to me and how life without you would be, I think about everything, the good times, the bad times, everything, sometimes it’s just overwhelming, knowing how much I love you, how I never want to be without you, how much we have come through together and proved that we have true love. I want to be with you forever, love can be so many things, friendship love, family love, relationship love, but I believe our kind of love is special. it’s more than just a relationship, it’s this deep connection I only feel with you. No other person can make me feel that kind of connection, where im a part of you. We’re a part of each other. That’s why it hurts so much to be away from you. You’re away from the one you belong with. It’s like a heart without a beat, like a fish without water, life without breath, like earth without gravity. It would be a big depressing mess, like a desolate field, a plant without water. You’re more than my boyfriend, you’re also my best friend, you’re the person I feel closest to, I know there are times when I can be selfish, mean, and impatient, or do things to hurt you, but I am sorry for all of those times, because when I really think about it, there isn’t much to complain about when it comes to love, and there is no reason to ever take something like it for granted. When I look into my heart, I see beautiful crystals and the part where I see you shines brighter than everything else, I do have your heart, but in my heart I also believe that ours have come together, like they were glued, they can’t be pulled apart. I think about all of the memories that we have together, all of the memories that touch my heart and make me smile. I love the way that my hand fits perfectly in yours, the way that you look when you smile at me, when I look in your eyes and I just feel like I am at home, and home is where the heart is. Your arms hold me and I feel protected, when your holding me I just want to stay there and never let go, feeling the connection between us when we are touching, like the connection whether we are hugging, kissing, holding hands, I love being near you, even when we’re apart, as hard and saddening it is to not be near you, you are still in my heart. The feeling of when our lips first met was magical, and everytime our lips meet still yet, I feel the love we have.