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puppyluvr2112
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Erm....here's my poem and... feel free to say anything you want to about the poem with the exception of anything hateful. Criticism is accepted and valued as long as it is constructive or has a point...so....here goes nothing.
Hell,
I'm lost in it.
Heaven,
I want to find it.
I think I have
then the facade is gone
it's just me and this devil.
Devil of the knife
the glass,
Bloodily pressed into searching hands
writing love on my arms
Dark love,
love from a different source
Love from hell.
Carved into what I want to be
stuck with what I really am
But covered in the proof
of my loving affair with hell.
Don't cry me a river of tears,
it's a river of blood.
Write a note,
sign your name
dot the i's, cross the t's.
WITH LOVE.
THE DEVIL
(your not so secret love)
..okay.....
Hell,
I'm lost in it.
Heaven,
I want to find it.
I think I have
then the facade is gone
it's just me and this devil.
Devil of the knife
the glass,
Bloodily pressed into searching hands
writing love on my arms
Dark love,
love from a different source
Love from hell.
Carved into what I want to be
stuck with what I really am
But covered in the proof
of my loving affair with hell.
Don't cry me a river of tears,
it's a river of blood.
Write a note,
sign your name
dot the i's, cross the t's.
WITH LOVE.
THE DEVIL
(your not so secret love)
..okay.....