MAN UTD 4 LYF
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Ok i need to no which of my opening paragraphs (for a book) is the most interesting?
1.) Tick, tock, tick, tock. That's all i ever heard. But that night was different. I heard a scream and then silence.
OR
2.) She was there,lying across the room. I heard her whimpering now and again, never thought anything of it. That was where i was wrong!
1.) Tick, tock, tick, tock. That's all i ever heard. But that night was different. I heard a scream and then silence.
OR
2.) She was there,lying across the room. I heard her whimpering now and again, never thought anything of it. That was where i was wrong!