D dance New member Nov 13, 2010 #1 you're a flicker in my eye a restless night followed by the sun's glare and setting haze to mark the end of days smoke collared secrets to end the old year to show i'm weak when you're near how i'm meek but never smug laughing in the face of love
you're a flicker in my eye a restless night followed by the sun's glare and setting haze to mark the end of days smoke collared secrets to end the old year to show i'm weak when you're near how i'm meek but never smug laughing in the face of love
D deaththekid New member Nov 16, 2010 #5 Yeah, it's pretty good. But the ending comes off as cheesy to me idk.