i will surely help you. i have a poem here for you and some tips. i want you to wish all the best and i am very glad that i am helping you.
OUTSIDE MY WINDOW
I look outside my window
first thing every morning
instead of my mirror
I see beauty
in the window view
instead of a face
I see every day
when the razor
cuts the whiskers away
and my teeth are brushed
I smile and see my age
I look outside my window
for the young day
born anew
the sun rise or cloudy skies
the snow flakes spin
the rain drops drip
the wind blows trees
the green lawn
or the brown of fall
leaves yellow & brown
blanket the ground
or buds appear
in spring
I look outside my window
for my youth
I see in my mirror
it's disappeared
but in my heart I know
that outside lies anew
the here and now
I want to view
her beauty again
for just one minute
for just one day
I want to feel
like it's the first
day of my life
I want to feel cold
I want to feel hot
I want to feel alive
I want to breath
I look outside my window
I want to feel happy
I want to feel sad
I want to feel
if I look close enough
I might see my reflection
outside my window
in the recess of my mind
I look outside my window
i am sorry for i also dont have time to make my own poem. this poem is from dane clark.
but if you want any help in writing poems, tell to me i will compose a beautiful poem for you.
here are some tips from me
Think about what you are trying to express but don't do it with literal intentions, use symbols, metaphors and descriptions.
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Most of all have fun, strong feelings of any kind will enhance your true nature and you will find it easier to express it through your poetry.
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Be happy writing poetry, this is your time to expand and write whatever comes into your mind.
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Write to the world or write poetry to someone special.
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Don't be shy.
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Give thanks for life, reward it with a poem.
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Submit your poems. Sooner or later you have to send your babies out into the world to find their way. Emily Dickinson was a fluke, most people who don't publish while they're alive will never be seen or heard of -- no matter how good their poems.
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Say what you want to say, let the reader decide what it means.
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Don't explain EVERYTHING.
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Poems that focus on form (Sonnet, Villanelle, etc.) are a challenge. They make you think.
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People will remember an image long after they've forgotten why it was there.
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If you write a bad poem, at least you wrote.
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Develop your voice. Get comfortable with how YOU write poetry.
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Don't be afraid to write poetry from a different point of view. Write a poem that says exactly the opposite of what you believe, and do it without irony.
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Untitled poems are lazy. They're like unnamed children. Obviously their parent doesn't care about them.
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Write in different places. Keep a notebook. Write in a park or on a street-corner or in an alley. You don't HAVE to write about the place, but it will influence you whether you do or not.
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Listen to talk radio while you write. Listen to the people who call. Great characters and voices emerge that way.
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If you don't like a poem or poet, figure out exactly why. Chances are, it reflects something you don't like about your own poetry.
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When nothing is coming, start writing poetry very fast-- any word, phrase or sentence that comes to mind. Do that for about a minute, then go back to your poem. (I call this flushing.) Whether to use anything you flushed is up to you. You can, but that's not the purpose.
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