two of my poems...tell me what you think?

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1st poem......

TRYING SO HARD TO BE PERFECT TO BE AN ANGEL IN

THEIR EYES SO SHE KEEPS A HAPPY FACE

WHILE SILENTLY SHE DIES



WALKING IN SOLITUDE THE QUIET IS KILLING HER SOUL

SHE'S TRYING TO HOLD ON BUT WILLING TO

LET GO LEFT ALL ALONE WITH THESE

THOUGHTS INSIDE HER HEAD



TRYING NOT TO LISTEN BECAUSE THEY ALL WANT HER

DEAD NOTHING WILL EVER BE OKAY IN THIS

CRUEL AND EMPTY WORLD AND SHE

WILL NEVER BE YOUR

PERFECT GIRL


2nd poem


how will you know she is hurting if you cannot see her pain

she wears it on her body because her words cannot

explain the cuts and scratches on her arm should

have been a clue but you never cared

about anyone but you



all she ever wanted was to be your one and only love but you made

her feel that she wasnt good enough and you never stopped

to ask her if everything was ok you just look past and

ignore her each and every day



you never stopped to ask her why she does this to herself

you just sit and wonder why she doesnt get some help

you never thought the help she needed might just be

from you. you only pass judgement and tell

her what to do



so she sits alone in the dark and cries silently to

herself and the crimsons falling from her

arms because she has nobody else
 
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