hamsterlover
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this is the first poem I've ever really written, and it's for 7th grade english. is it too cheesy? the assignment is to write metaphors for yourself.
An Oak tree in the sky
Sometimes I am the sun behind a cloud
Who, during the day everyone looks up at
And thinks they see the sun
But only really see a cloud
But when the sun sets
And no one is watching
The cloud floats away
And if you looked, you would see
That the sun is really an oak tree
With the tips of its leaves caching the wind
Or you might hear music
A million voices singing the same song
A falcon flying over a field
Lifted up by the air
If you looked
An Oak tree in the sky
Sometimes I am the sun behind a cloud
Who, during the day everyone looks up at
And thinks they see the sun
But only really see a cloud
But when the sun sets
And no one is watching
The cloud floats away
And if you looked, you would see
That the sun is really an oak tree
With the tips of its leaves caching the wind
Or you might hear music
A million voices singing the same song
A falcon flying over a field
Lifted up by the air
If you looked