Just want to hear peoples opinions. 
I am aware that it's a big ball of CHEESE but.. Oh well.
Oh and is there any grammatical/spelling errors?
Y'know that boy? He does make me smile. Alot. I don't know what it is about him, whether it's his addictive laugh or irresistable hair, but whenever I glance over at that door and see him enter the room, a huge, uncontrolable grin appears on my face and whatever I do, it won't go away -- Like theres some magnetic force that's dragging the sides of my lips wider and wider until I can't feel my face anymore. Not that I'm not complaining, I love smiling. Especially when it's because of... Yeah, him. That boy.
I am aware that it's a big ball of CHEESE but.. Oh well.
Oh and is there any grammatical/spelling errors?
Y'know that boy? He does make me smile. Alot. I don't know what it is about him, whether it's his addictive laugh or irresistable hair, but whenever I glance over at that door and see him enter the room, a huge, uncontrolable grin appears on my face and whatever I do, it won't go away -- Like theres some magnetic force that's dragging the sides of my lips wider and wider until I can't feel my face anymore. Not that I'm not complaining, I love smiling. Especially when it's because of... Yeah, him. That boy.