I don't like rhyming poetry, so yea. How do I improve it.?
i remember
raindrops
falling and
almost going
through me.
my shadows
overlapped on
the pavement
and seeked
shelter under
the definition
of The Lost(me).
each raindrop
whispered a
part of our before.
and from
those
same drops,
a puddle
formed on
the ground,
which turned.
it reflected our
complete past.
and that's how
it was every time i
f
e
l
l
.
this is how i
reminisce and
hold on to what
happened between
us. what lights
up my after are
the lightning
between the
skies.
and they're rare.
like puddles
that relive
your mistakes
and regrets.
Thanks for the compliments guys.
I'll post more later on and hope to receive more feedback from y'all.
i remember
raindrops
falling and
almost going
through me.
my shadows
overlapped on
the pavement
and seeked
shelter under
the definition
of The Lost(me).
each raindrop
whispered a
part of our before.
and from
those
same drops,
a puddle
formed on
the ground,
which turned.
it reflected our
complete past.
and that's how
it was every time i
f
e
l
l
.
this is how i
reminisce and
hold on to what
happened between
us. what lights
up my after are
the lightning
between the
skies.
and they're rare.
like puddles
that relive
your mistakes
and regrets.
Thanks for the compliments guys.
I'll post more later on and hope to receive more feedback from y'all.