This one is very short but sharp. And Gothic. Comments?

H

Himedal

New member
Dream Killer

I am coming
For your dreams
It is time to taste
The bitter reality

Wake up now
Good morning honey

Allow me to introduce myself
I am the life
The dream killer

Do not be afraid
I am a friend

Himedal
Jan2011
Hi Caz, How are you? You're so kind. Thank you. Actually I can hardly call it a poem; it's too simple. Yes keep it. Your welcome.
 
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