The general summary of my first chapter is thus....
On a wintery evening in London, a family goes to the movie for the late night show. When they are booking the tickets, their one year old baby (who is later going to be the main character) gets mysteriously lost in the crowd. They search the entire place frantically and call the police but the baby is nowhere to be seen. Finally after an hour, they go down in the car park to find him sleeping on a bench. But when they take him and go back upstairs, they hardly realise that this incident has changed everything....
This is just the summary of my first chapter. Is it good?
On a wintery evening in London, a family goes to the movie for the late night show. When they are booking the tickets, their one year old baby (who is later going to be the main character) gets mysteriously lost in the crowd. They search the entire place frantically and call the police but the baby is nowhere to be seen. Finally after an hour, they go down in the car park to find him sleeping on a bench. But when they take him and go back upstairs, they hardly realise that this incident has changed everything....
This is just the summary of my first chapter. Is it good?