this is one of my weakest poems...i'm usually not as"simple" or "ordinary"..but is

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it at all good? each thorn on a rose
each peddle on a flower
each leaf on a stem, remind me of you.

each crooked smile
every quiet spot
every whisper in my ear, remind me of you.

each star in the sky
each wave in the ocean
each gust of wind, only remind me of you.

each thorn on a rose
each peddle on a flower
each leaf on a stem, just remind me of you.

because,
thorn's are the strongest aspect on a gentle rose...
and each crooked smile has a hint of wonder...
for every star in the sky shines for the entire world to see, but depending on who looks forth at it's individuality...
 
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