Qwerty Flurty
New member
I posted this in the relationship section, but someone suggested I repost it in the poetry section, too.
I have class with this guy and he handed me this as we were leaving. I read it as I walked across the quad to my next class-
kiss your breath of rose red lips
hatchet wound so wet with love
thighs so smooth and creamy caress
my lust brings showers below and above
silky touch, feathery sighs
painful pleasure, deliciously cry
Oh hatchet wound, you've come to know
I will mend you as the seeds I sow
It seems really beautiful to me, but I don't know much about poetry. The hatchet wound seems weird. What do you guys think?
I have class with this guy and he handed me this as we were leaving. I read it as I walked across the quad to my next class-
kiss your breath of rose red lips
hatchet wound so wet with love
thighs so smooth and creamy caress
my lust brings showers below and above
silky touch, feathery sighs
painful pleasure, deliciously cry
Oh hatchet wound, you've come to know
I will mend you as the seeds I sow
It seems really beautiful to me, but I don't know much about poetry. The hatchet wound seems weird. What do you guys think?