Theory of relativity

Dianne A

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I really need help on this because my thoughts are really scattered on this song but I really like where it's going all feedback is greatly appreicated


The clock on the wall is ticking time so slow it seems all the moment will never pass…

So when will I get over you…

the time on the wall seems to never move

everyone around me seems to keep moving along like nothing has gone wrong

but I seem to stand still just falling apart

as time never wants to move fast enough so I can breathe again..

I’m still sitting here wishing yesterday will come around again…

the clock on the wall leaves me here in this pain

it seems to hold still in hopes I won’t move on

I didn’t realize today was already gone

I guess time isn’t moving so slow after all…


time has promised to erase all of this pain....

but for some reason times keeps playing games

It refuses to pick up the pace to heal this broken heart….


Time never seem to pass so slow when you were around

It seem to never stop now that you're gone time seems so abundant

as it stanRAB still I keep on wishing this pain would pass away with all the memories we made


Time is such a trick on the mind

just when you want it stop or just slow down

it never wants to stand still

time is never on your side when it hurts too much to breathe

That’s when it slows down nothing seems to pass

you’re stuck in the moment because

Time, time, time it’s never on your side when your world falls apart


The movement of time is never guaranteed

It flys by when we want to hold on to the moment we're in

But when we want it to end time crawls by to remind us of the pain we're in

Time, time, time it ticks by so slow in it's promise to heal our pain




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woooahh cowboy. Put this into stanzas so that people can actually read it without feeling like it's a huge run on sentence.

If you separate it up, I'll critique it.
 
I'm not sure how to break it up like that but I tried to break it up into a way I feel it should be sang I hope it's easier to read I would really appreciate your critiques
 
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