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The streets were dark, foggy, like one of those scenes you see in the movies.
“if you are listening to do, you better follow along. If you don’t the consequences are dreaded” a woman's voice whispered
Michael kept the phone near his ear.
“ what I am about to tell you is real, no lie, no scam. If u received this voice meal, it means you are either related to me or you will probably share the same fate as me”
Micheal wondered what was going on, he never recognized that voice before. It seemed so fragile, so delicate. Her voice reminded him of glass, smooth and clear, yet it seems like it can break in any second. He didn’t know why he had received this messages. There is no number on it, no nothing. All it said was withheld. He looked at his sliver blackberry, looking at the messages. All mysteriously deleted.
“what did she mean by “fate”. I know for sure I am not related to her” Micheal thought
“you will be receiving a series of voice mails, the amount is depending on who you are. I hate doing this but ill be set free, but you will keep the curse. And no this is not one of those stupid little forwards like those text messages you get from your friends. It’s the same concept. the difference is, I actually tell the truth, and what I say will happen WILL happen”
Micheal started to laugh. “what a stupid joke someone made, I mean at least make it more scary. This shit doesn't even scare me , it didn't even give me a one single goose-bump” Micheal thought to himself again.
“oh but Micheal, your wrong. you see some idiot didn’t make this. It isn't a joke Micheal, and yes I know what your thinking. I know where you are. I know what time is it. heck I even know what you wearing.”
Michael almost dropped his phone.
“plaid shirt, hidden behind a hoodie, which I know you have the hood up. Calm blue jeans and blue and Grey vans, is that right? Oh look you’re blinking quickly. What,you can’t believe this? Are you wondering how do I know this?”
“that would be nice to know” Micheal said loud and clearly
The voice laughed “oh and I forgot one important detail…. I’m already dead. HA , betcha u didn’t expect that, huh? Well I am certainly not a stalker, but I follow along this voice mail telling YOU what you can do to set me free. If you do it right, you will be blessed. Ignore this issue, and well… I would have to do death’s job, ”
“what a stupid joke. I think ill tell bobby to do a better job with his voice mail chain letter next time” Micheal laughed but yelled to the phone. “I am not doing this”
“wrong decision Michael” said the voice with regret
“oh yeah…” Michael said sarcastically with a smirk on his face “watch me delete this voice mail”
“you have been warned” the voice said sadly
*****
In the distance, an hour later. A blood chilling scream was late out, and a noise from a car scraping the ground was almost heard perfectly from houses near the lake . The next day,a car was found in the lake, and the driver was unknown due to the serve wounds. Later the name of the driver was announced. Michael Pine, age 16, was pronounced dead at 12:00am on June 19, 2010,at the "town of angles" hospital.
yeah i am dong a project for school, where we are suppose to make a story. so criticism needed
sorry for my spelling on some parts :3 im 13 so no comments saying this is a stupid piece of crap...
“if you are listening to do, you better follow along. If you don’t the consequences are dreaded” a woman's voice whispered
Michael kept the phone near his ear.
“ what I am about to tell you is real, no lie, no scam. If u received this voice meal, it means you are either related to me or you will probably share the same fate as me”
Micheal wondered what was going on, he never recognized that voice before. It seemed so fragile, so delicate. Her voice reminded him of glass, smooth and clear, yet it seems like it can break in any second. He didn’t know why he had received this messages. There is no number on it, no nothing. All it said was withheld. He looked at his sliver blackberry, looking at the messages. All mysteriously deleted.
“what did she mean by “fate”. I know for sure I am not related to her” Micheal thought
“you will be receiving a series of voice mails, the amount is depending on who you are. I hate doing this but ill be set free, but you will keep the curse. And no this is not one of those stupid little forwards like those text messages you get from your friends. It’s the same concept. the difference is, I actually tell the truth, and what I say will happen WILL happen”
Micheal started to laugh. “what a stupid joke someone made, I mean at least make it more scary. This shit doesn't even scare me , it didn't even give me a one single goose-bump” Micheal thought to himself again.
“oh but Micheal, your wrong. you see some idiot didn’t make this. It isn't a joke Micheal, and yes I know what your thinking. I know where you are. I know what time is it. heck I even know what you wearing.”
Michael almost dropped his phone.
“plaid shirt, hidden behind a hoodie, which I know you have the hood up. Calm blue jeans and blue and Grey vans, is that right? Oh look you’re blinking quickly. What,you can’t believe this? Are you wondering how do I know this?”
“that would be nice to know” Micheal said loud and clearly
The voice laughed “oh and I forgot one important detail…. I’m already dead. HA , betcha u didn’t expect that, huh? Well I am certainly not a stalker, but I follow along this voice mail telling YOU what you can do to set me free. If you do it right, you will be blessed. Ignore this issue, and well… I would have to do death’s job, ”
“what a stupid joke. I think ill tell bobby to do a better job with his voice mail chain letter next time” Micheal laughed but yelled to the phone. “I am not doing this”
“wrong decision Michael” said the voice with regret
“oh yeah…” Michael said sarcastically with a smirk on his face “watch me delete this voice mail”
“you have been warned” the voice said sadly
*****
In the distance, an hour later. A blood chilling scream was late out, and a noise from a car scraping the ground was almost heard perfectly from houses near the lake . The next day,a car was found in the lake, and the driver was unknown due to the serve wounds. Later the name of the driver was announced. Michael Pine, age 16, was pronounced dead at 12:00am on June 19, 2010,at the "town of angles" hospital.
yeah i am dong a project for school, where we are suppose to make a story. so criticism needed
sorry for my spelling on some parts :3 im 13 so no comments saying this is a stupid piece of crap...