Tell me if this song I wrote is good or not...?

[wowzers<3]

This is a song I wrote, please give me suggestions to make it better and maybe a title..? thank you!


I’m not sure why...
I think I could be
Feeling something
maybe it’s just me
Why don’t I just
Take a chance on you

But first I will..
Wait for you
To make that move..
I pray you do..
Cause I want you to..

Take my hand and run with me
Have some faith it’s too easy
Falling for you is like
It’s like….

Natural it’s like riding a bike
It’s natural that’s what it’s like
It’s easy to fall like this
It’s simple with one sweet kiss


As I'm sitting here
Sitting on the beach
Waiting for you
Make that move on me
Stars are shinin’
Across the sky
You kiss me
I feel I can fly

All around us
I see nobody
In the darkness
It's just
you and me

Take my hand and run with me
Have some faith it’s too easy
Falling for you is like
It’s like….

Natural it’s like riding a bike
Its natural is what it’s like
It’s easy to fall like this
It’s simple with one sweet kiss


I Can barely take it..
Heart won’t stop racing..
I just want you to...

Take my hand and run with me
Have some faith it’s too easy
Falling for you is like
It’s like….

Natural it’s like riding a bike
Its natural is what it’s like
It’s easy to fall like this
It’s simple with one sweet kiss

Stars are shinin’
Across the sky
You kiss me
I feel I can fly

Falling for you is like
It’s like….
Natural