well i didnt write it all my self i kind of got it from another question i asked and my teacher made me reword and redo it....i would like you to tell me if this is good or not and please tell me what to put on the second C line and the gg parts the line has to have 10 sylables no less and no more.....please rate it for me and tell me if something is wrong or doesnt sound write.......
A i can not last through all this pain and war
B it is worse between my heart and my mind
A i need to reveal what my feelings are
B but neet to relase all that is confined
C every singlw breath that i am taking
D makes my heart ache of the choices you make
C
D and watch my heart break in bits of peices
E your true feelings are still unknown inside
F my heart hurts as a tear slides down my cheek
E feelings im holding in side are locked
F as i try to peek if your still with me
G
G
please help and thank you i will surly give points to thje best one
A i can not last through all this pain and war
B it is worse between my heart and my mind
A i need to reveal what my feelings are
B but neet to relase all that is confined
C every singlw breath that i am taking
D makes my heart ache of the choices you make
C
D and watch my heart break in bits of peices
E your true feelings are still unknown inside
F my heart hurts as a tear slides down my cheek
E feelings im holding in side are locked
F as i try to peek if your still with me
G
G
please help and thank you i will surly give points to thje best one