1. I'm not asking for a grade from more people.
2. I'm not looking for praise, I'm asking for opinions about the poem as a whole.
I really put myself out to my class and the teacher decided to grade them lol. So, I got a 35/50. Ouch. So, what do you think?
Man,
I hate that purple dress in my closet
that fits so well, that flows nicely through the wind.
I despise that monster who gave it to me.
He stole it, and my logic.
My purple dress has black checkers that
make it one big bruise.
Now I debate again; should I keep it?
The thing is this wasn't a class that had to do with poetry or reading or writing. She's suppose to be teaching us how to teach. Psh. Thanks everyone.
2. I'm not looking for praise, I'm asking for opinions about the poem as a whole.
I really put myself out to my class and the teacher decided to grade them lol. So, I got a 35/50. Ouch. So, what do you think?
Man,
I hate that purple dress in my closet
that fits so well, that flows nicely through the wind.
I despise that monster who gave it to me.
He stole it, and my logic.
My purple dress has black checkers that
make it one big bruise.
Now I debate again; should I keep it?
The thing is this wasn't a class that had to do with poetry or reading or writing. She's suppose to be teaching us how to teach. Psh. Thanks everyone.