strange city. a deep haiku. will you take a look?

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I have lost my way
In a strange city at night
In the town named life

stephen raymond
i like this better

i have lost my way
in a strange city at night
the city named life
thank you so much :)
thank you Gene. that is actually the reason why i started haiku, because of what you said. i think haiku suites me the best. i have no desire to write about nature at the moment, but i will :) thank you for your opinion. it means alot when someone with great talent gives an opinion. thank you :)
my next plan is to self publish a haiku book. and i have the money because my lazy a$$ actualy got a job :0 why is everyone so surprised??? its at the comic book shop so i stock the shyt and play poemon and magic all day xD well....for the time i work there (whic isnt long due to school) but its cool :)
my next plan is to self publish a haiku book. and i have the money because my lazy a$$ actualy got a job :0 why is everyone so surprised??? its at the comic book shop so i stock the shyt and play poemon and magic all day xD well....for the time i work there (whic isnt long due to school) but its cool :)
 
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