Story for school HELP!?

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5, 6 year old girls going to Chuckie Cheeses for a birthday party and her grandfather gives her an Ouija Board. They wish to come in contact with Hannah Montana (even though shes still alive; they dont know that) but instead its Saddam Hussein who pretends to be her. The board forms itself into saddam hussein. The girls run out of the room screaming and crying. Later on the RCMP arrive armed w/ weapons and a lasoo they try to shoot at him but fail because of the different forms he took on. They radioed for security from the casino who shortly kick in the back party room door and a 2 litre bottle of A&W rootbeer goes flying through the air and spills on the board and the board turns into a soggy piece of newspaper.
Thats what the story is about (This is for a Tabloid)
My teacher said he doesnt approve of saddam hussein popping out cuz its not real. Thats not what they do. How should I make it so he doesnt pop out of the board?
I know its lame.

That was the point of the story to make it like kiddish. But I just want to know how I can have it so he doesnt actually pop out.... sheesh.
I know, I told him so many times Tabloids are fake. There not to be realistic. But w.e hes an A-Hole anways...
 
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