I need to write these 2 poems for spanish class and I was wondering if someone could help me find any errors
Robot
Cascara metalico
Desatento, confudido, decidido
No sientes el frio?
Solo
Pluma
Memoria del ciel
Aleteo, balanceo, flaquea
Te deseas a regresar?
Cayido
The idea is
Noun
Describes subject in two words
An action about the subject in three words
An emotion about the subject in 4 words
Restates subject in one more word that reflects rest of poem
Thank you ^^
Robot
Cascara metalico
Desatento, confudido, decidido
No sientes el frio?
Solo
Pluma
Memoria del ciel
Aleteo, balanceo, flaquea
Te deseas a regresar?
Cayido
The idea is
Noun
Describes subject in two words
An action about the subject in three words
An emotion about the subject in 4 words
Restates subject in one more word that reflects rest of poem
Thank you ^^