Written to thank a girl for being awesome. Critique is welcome:
I was going to write you a play
to thank you for being so cool.
but by the end it was more ballet
and you know I'm not one for ridicule.
So I started to plant you some flowers
With such height you wouldn't believe.
But they didn't grow tall several towers
and now I'm left here to grieve.
But still I've come to a conclusion
to show my thanks for your charity.
This should erase all illusion
as to whom I owe great sincerity.
Thought with pen I have little skill
I hope still this does show my goodwill.
in the 13th line it's supposed to be though not thought
I was going to write you a play
to thank you for being so cool.
but by the end it was more ballet
and you know I'm not one for ridicule.
So I started to plant you some flowers
With such height you wouldn't believe.
But they didn't grow tall several towers
and now I'm left here to grieve.
But still I've come to a conclusion
to show my thanks for your charity.
This should erase all illusion
as to whom I owe great sincerity.
Thought with pen I have little skill
I hope still this does show my goodwill.
in the 13th line it's supposed to be though not thought