Someone help me with usage and mechanics worksheet plz?

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1. A very long run on the trail. Buck and the other dogs are more tired than they have ever been. They need a good rest they are sold to new owners who do not know the right way to treat dogs.

I need help on that one. Confusing to me

2. Hal's dream is to strike it rich in Alaska he brings his sister and her husband. The tree people do not listen to the advice of their neighbors. They ignore warnings and risk the dogs' lives.

I proofreaded everything except for the sister and husband part. But correct me if I'm wrong.

3. John Thornton teaches Buck what it means to love. Buck is devoted to Thornton will do anything for him. He obeys Thornton's commands.

The ending doesn't sound right? Is anything else wrong?
 
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