Some of my poetry... can i please get some feedback... i wrote this in like 5 minutes?

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Nothing seems right anymore
For once I am lost for words
I am tripping and stumbling
I don’t know which way is up
I don’t know which way is down
I can’t breathe and my head is spinning
I want to know that things will be okay
Maybe some day I will
Maybe they never will be
Nothing is okay
I thought I was over the past
But I guess I was wrong
 
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