So, what do you think of my rock and roll poem/song?

Kaydee Bug

New member
So, I kinda see this being sung as a song with like a 60's type beat. Something along the line of Elvis Presley's blue suede shoes. But like just as a poem too, how is it?

Rock it out
or dance it slow,
sing it fast
or let it flow,

However you make your moves,
However you get your grooves,
Whatever you like to do,
Put your dancin' shoes on, I'm gonna party with you.

Turn up the music,
Rock out the beat,
Don't take time to think it through
just rock, oh rock those feet!

Make your moves.
Get your grooves.
Rock it out,
I'm gonna party with you!

Rock oh, rock this party house,
rock oh, rock this town.
We're gonna get this party started,
so come on and let your hair down!

Rock it out
or dance it slow,
sing it fast
or let it flow
Put your dancin' shoes on,
this parties ago!


comments and critiquing welcome (but please be nice, I'm a very sensitive person)
 
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